I signed a contract for a new RomCom releasing this summer! Before I tell you the title or premise, I thought I’d take you through the inspiration, research, and plotting stages with me, so you can see where stories come from.
Inspiration:
Author Sarah Monzon posted the picture below on her Facebook page.
This man is the assistant coach for her son’s sports team. But I recognized him from one of my favorite shows (The Firm). His name is Josh Lucas, and he’s an actor.
I thought, That would make a fun meet-cute for a single mom and the movie star coaching her kid. I reached out to Sarah with the suggestion. She basically said, “You write it.”
That sounded fun. I started by asking what might bring this couple together. Maybe I could do a fake dating trope. I’ve never done that before. The hero could want to pretend they were dating to keep the other single moms away, and the heroine might play along for a chance to help coach.
This is where I decided to make her obsessed with soccer. She’s a crazy coach, pushing her team of six-year-olds a little too far. She used to be the head coach, but she was removed from the position.
Then Sarah pointed out the fact that if other parents steer clear of her because she’s nuts, then the two wouldn’t have to pretend to date. Simply letting her help coach creates the needed buffer.
Research:
I told my critique partner Heather Woodhaven about the idea. She responded, “My sister-in-law is a soccer coach. You should talk to her.” And she set up a time for the three of us to meet for coffee.
The sister-in-law’s team won every single soccer game by seven points last year. If they’d won any game by more than seven points, she would have received a red tag, and after three red tags, she would have been removed. Perfect for my story!
Then came tales from her experience. Tales of…
Dance moms who bring their daughters to practice in tutus and full makeup.
Politically correct parents who cheer, “We’re all winners!” And cluelessly supportive parents who shout, “Go, my favorite sports team!”
Girls accidentally kicking off their shoes often enough that they needed to be duct taped on.
Not to mention the secret practices.
These characters pretty much wrote themselves. Now for…
Plotting:
I knew what would bring the hero and heroine together, but what will keep them apart? I don’t want to give away too much, so I’m just going to talk about theme here…
One of the little girls on my new friend’s team had a bad habit of kicking the ball as hard as she could out of bounds whenever it came near her. She sent it “out of play.” That’s exactly how my hero and heroine participate in the game of love. When it comes to the dating world, they are also out of play. Which gives the phrase a double-meaning and makes a great book title.
For this story, I’m excited to explore the importance of play. What makes people err on either the side of being too serious or not serious enough? Why is it easier to quit than lose? How much does it hurt to play your hardest only to find out it’s not enough?
To sum up, Plato got it right when he said, “You can discover more about a person in an hour of play than in a year of conversation.”
Yes, I’m including some pretty deep stuff for a RomCom. But maybe that’s my whole point. The playfulness of humor makes it safe to be vulnerable, thus inviting authenticity and introspection.
Details:
In Out of Play, actor Skylar Hayes is unprepared for the pressure and attention that comes with coaching his niece’s six-year-old soccer team. He makes soccer-obsessed single mom, Bex Lawson, his assistant to both help win games and keep his fans at bay, never expecting their partnership to threaten the boundary lines of his heart.
This short novel will release in June as part of two summer love sets with some of your favorite sweet romance authors. Watch for Bright Lights and Starry Nights.
Now that you know my title and premise, what else would you hope to see in this story?
Jeannette says
The blog and more importantly, the origin of your book is a really interesting read! Thank you for letting us share in your creativity.
Stacey says
I loved reading about the process. How interesting! Thanks for sharing!
Dana Michael says
Wow! I need to look at Sarah’s insta to see Coach Lucas. hubba hubba! I love the book synopsis and can’t wait for this summer to read it.
Dianne K says
Sounds wonderful, I would hope to see some fireworks where their coaching and lifestyles clash and how their faith helps them work through that.
Paul James Rasmussen says
… lost my preliminary, it might add if you put it in a familiar area like Lake of the Ozarks
Angela strong says
I’m so glad! And thanks for letting me share.
Angela strong says
Oh good! I’m excited about it.
Angela strong says
Haha. Right?
Angela strong says
Yes! Great ideas.
Angela strong says
That looks like a cool setting.
Becky Lewis says
Oh, I forgot. Don’t forget to have that one uninterested kid infield who puts stone in ear, needs to go to ER. Real life, from hubby’s client., but baseball.
Angela strong says
Oh no!!! My team is all girls. Would a girl do this? Lol
Alicia Haney says
Wow , your book already sounds like a great read!! Thank you for sharing about it! Have a great weekend.
Marjorie says
It was a serious bloody nose, two black eyes, and a lost (baby) tooth from a ball to the face, while I was, hmm, counting grass blades maybe? but yes, uninterested and oblivious girls forced on the team because well meaning parents also have stupid freak accidents.
TexasMomma says
From a former preschool teacher…yes! Also…ear or nose, both are equally likely 😂
Deena Peterson says
Kissing! You write some of the best kisses! I’m so ready to read it!
RuthieH says
I loved hearing how you went from initial idea to story, it’s so interesting to hear about the process of writing.
Since your heroine is a single mom, I’d want to see some of how the hero gets on with her kids.
Angela Ruth Strong says
Oh no! I got a black eye from practicing softball with my dad. But that sounds even worse!!!
Angela Ruth Strong says
Sounds horrible!!!
Angela Ruth Strong says
I’m glad you think so. Hope you have a good weekend too!
Angela Ruth Strong says
There WILL be kissing!!!
Angela Ruth Strong says
As a former single mom, I will say that’s SUPER important!
TexasMomma says
Thankfully none were too bad….but you should Google videos of how to dislodge something in someone’s nose by blowing into the opposite nostril. Definitely romcom material! 😂
Debra Pruss says
Some conflict, possible letting the child play more than the others, and a happy ever after would be wonderful things to see in the book. Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you.
Angela Strong says
Great ideas! Thank you. <3
Regina Rudd Merrick says
This was with girls in the U-10 age group, but we had a girl who played goalie the whole season with her arm in a cast. The same girl hyper-extended a knee in HS and had to be picked up in an ambulance during the game. Yeah, she was one tough cookie!
Angela Ruth Strong says
Wowza! Impressive.